Wednesday, February 4, 2009

dare we follow moths

dare we follow moths
chasing pinpoints of hope then
burning from desire?

3 comments:

  1. Now this my friend, is a good haiku.

    I like the polished imagery that draws you in to the first two lines, then the smack of reality in the last.

    SWEEET.

    -Matthew

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  2. Thanks to you both for your comments!

    I wish I could say I was getting a firmer grasp at this, but I'll just continue to muddle along.

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