rush hour beauty
stirs sleepy salaryman
"too early for dreams"
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- fugitive pleasures
- Christmas haikus Japan-style
- connect the dots
- Grope Visit?
- パンティどこ？
- slurping your ramen
- weekend planning
- Arashiyama day and night
- perfect fit
- oasis is you
- the heart
- winter weekend
- warm loaves
- love you as is
- secrets bloom
- your breath animates
- exam distraction
- tunneling mouths
- all you leave behind
- never enough
- too early
- we are born from stars
- rush hour dreamer
- salaryman dreams
- distractions
- unfurl limbs
- lost
- lost
- let's get lost
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I like this whole series, but I think this one works the best. Clearest. Do you see them as a progression, or different perspectives on the same scene?
ReplyDeleteI usually just aim to finish one, but this has wound up being a progression, thanks to lots of commuting time on Osaka's subways. There's at least one more stored in my cellphone which I plan on posting. I was jokingly going to title the series "The Salaryman's Sad Quartet" or however many make the cut.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments so far. Much appreciated!
Subways are great prompts for haiku. What a great idea. I think giving a title to the series would work well.
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